Changes | Reviewer: Adam | 1/17/10

1. "Onslaught, comin and I'm packin in my lunch up"

Change "lunch up" to "lancia"
Lancia is an Italian automobile manufacturer, and they make a mini-van. Buffalo Bill drove a van.

2. "It's a girl, she looks pretty thin, but I want to skin"

Change "i want to skin" to " i want her skin"

3. "In a world of sin you are, this is turnin into a"

Change "sin you are" to "sin-doer"