Correction of "Sitting on the Front Porch Swing | Reviewer: Laurent Truillet | 10/25/2007

Hello,

I think that the following verse: "When the leaves in the hollow have been died to match our faces" only has sense if the word "died" is replaced by "dyed" (in the sense of "coloured".

In verse 3, I would prefer "Winter cares which WERE already few... instead of "WE'RE"

Regards,

Laurent TRUILLET